Barnyard Cake

So if you have already responded to questions from Books and authors from around the AtomicKitty (my mind), so you know, I tend to write about hell, demons, mythical creatures etc. Well lately I've been cursed with writer's block so I decided to try something new: write a story about the man with real problems of man. Haha, I know so unlike me. But how does it sound? Sorry if it's a bit rough, but it's just a rough draft =)

I am the Messiah of adolescents. I would say more, but I fear that some mom took this curious book against the floor of the room-yard-esque teenage daughter to scold me for modeling myself after the Lord or what or Lordess you call a god-daughter.
No, not me thinking I'm better than God. I'm just saying, of course, he saved us all and gave himself for us and so on, but do you think he would rule cliquey girls who love to shoot / Justin Bieber (which in my opinion, no ' is not as cute as Matt Damon), worry about spoiling their hair and scream at the sight of homeless people? Heck no. Hell. If I could, I find the nearest guillotine and beheaded myself. But then who would be around to annoy my little brother Kevin? I do not think Grammy'll get a lot of joy to put stuffed animals in his backpack and caking makeup on his face while he sleeps (and later to take pictures and post them on MySpace and Facebook). So I'll stay for a while. But if you ask me youngest daughter to get the number of the cell's Justin Bieber, I'm booking a flight at Versailles and asking if they still have this thing they used to behead Marie Antoinette.

I have to give it a 12/10 [2 extra points came from the anti-Justin Bieber] Pro-Matt Damon reference.
I love this. You have a beautiful voice, good description, and [talent and a wonderful appreciation of Matt Damon].

I also comment on your voice a bit more - it's fabulous. I rarely heard the voice of the author in writing [rarely in me], but I could certainly hear yours.

Nice job! (:

Not so. I was interested in the party Messiah, then he is still walking. Does any of that important to the story?

It looks pretty good. I love how you unique layout. It is really creative. Thank you for your comment on my story.

You should really write much, much more ... often, if you have a little better.

Is really good .. I hope your case of writer's block is gone

Incredible! You have a real gift! Keep writing! I wish I could write like you.
(:(:(: Just what I needed at the moment.

(Oh, and do not listen: "I wresled a bear once" it does not include real works of art as we do. He could see that in writing, as always telling a story. Part History is good, but it's the details that make the art itself.)